Aubs' Sleepover Persuasive Writing

My writeing of the wester diamond back rattlesnakes: written and typed by Aubrey

Diamond backs live in the desert. Diamond backs do alot they eat ,sleep,hibernate ,rattle,slither by moving there long body,and strike. Different kinds of rattle snakes look different. For instance, Diamondbacks have diamonds on them. They are not slimy, they are smooth. Their rattle sounds like a baby's rattle. I have never tasted a rattlesnake so I don't no what it tastes like.the parts of rattlesnakes are eyes ears mouth nose fangs and toug body and rattle.one more thing it's a fun.fact did you know when rattlesnakes shed tere skin they get another rattle.cool.

(This was her first time typing! Looking into typing programs now for my budding writer.) 

Summer's here

 

Everyone is on their devices. (Aubrey)

Yikes! (Mommy)

The Story of What I Saw

Written by Aubs

Once in a land called Crazy Land, I saw a zebra and a lion doing something crazy. It was a nice sunny afternoon and the zebra was grazing when the lion showed up with a red motorcycle with four other lions running behind him.  He stopped and got off the motorcycle and went to catch some meat with his friends. The zebra spotted the motorcycle and wanted it for himself. So the zebra got on the motorcycle and started driving. Meanwhile, the lions spotted the zebra on the motorcycle. The lions did not just want the motorcycle back, they thought the zebra looked tasty. So the lions caught the motorcycle by busting the wheel open with their claws to make the motorcycle stop moving. They made a deal with the zebra. If the zebra gives the motorcycle back, then they won't eat the zebra. He said yes, and they all lived happily ever after. Well the land is called Crazy Land right? If you said yes, you are right because what I just told you about is crazy!